I might probably change the font color and the background and since I have my baby picture on there, I'm gonna add a recent picture of myself (maybe) jumping on the stones. :)
Good idea on changing the background color and font! I suggest even changing the stone color and sizes as well to create your poster to be more appealing and also show that each stepping stone was a different point of your life and how they were difficult to get through. Don't forget to add another picture of yourself just as you planned to on your final draft! I think it's a good idea to make it look like you are jumping over the stones too! Overall, great job it's a really good poster that helps portray your coming of age well!
Hey Melly! :D I like what you used for your Coming of Age. I like the colors of the background, but be more creative with it. It just looks plain. I don't think you want a plain background now do you? :P Aha, but yea. Just be unique. I'm sure you can do that! Add in a little more pictures to show your Coming of Age. Nice choice of words you have there. I LOVE IT. For your baby picture, blur the edges that were cut so it won't look like you cut it, get what I mean? :P You could also describe more on your poster. It would be great if you did. Show the real meaning of what " Coming of Age " really means. That's it. Just do all of that and you'll do great. ;D
Hi Mel, Thoughtful job on your poster. And thoughtful comments from your teammates.... I think your plan for revision is a good one, adding yourself jumping over the stones. I also think you may need to cut down the number of stones and place them in a more meaningful way--like which part is the most significant? Right now, your middle is the biggest. I like Angelica's suggestion about varying the stones' appearance to highlight their difficulty or importance. That would also require being more selective of which stones to include :) Great start mrs s
Good idea on changing the background color and font! I suggest even changing the stone color and sizes as well to create your poster to be more appealing and also show that each stepping stone was a different point of your life and how they were difficult to get through. Don't forget to add another picture of yourself just as you planned to on your final draft! I think it's a good idea to make it look like you are jumping over the stones too! Overall, great job it's a really good poster that helps portray your coming of age well!
ReplyDeleteHey Melly! :D
ReplyDeleteI like what you used for your Coming of Age. I like the colors of the background, but be more creative with it. It just looks plain. I don't think you want a plain background now do you? :P Aha, but yea. Just be unique. I'm sure you can do that! Add in a little more pictures to show your Coming of Age. Nice choice of words you have there. I LOVE IT. For your baby picture, blur the edges that were cut so it won't look like you cut it, get what I mean? :P You could also describe more on your poster. It would be great if you did. Show the real meaning of what " Coming of Age " really means. That's it. Just do all of that and you'll do great. ;D
~ Lex
Hi Mel,
ReplyDeleteThoughtful job on your poster. And thoughtful comments from your teammates....
I think your plan for revision is a good one, adding yourself jumping over the stones.
I also think you may need to cut down the number of stones and place them in a more meaningful way--like which part is the most significant? Right now, your middle is the biggest.
I like Angelica's suggestion about varying the stones' appearance to highlight their difficulty or importance. That would also require being more selective of which stones to include :)
Great start
mrs s