Mom/Dad, can you please make a reflection on what you thought about my portfolio. Please answer the following questions:
- 1. What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
2. What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
3. Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency) do you feel was most successful for me?
4. Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
1. I liked the querencia essay because from the early mind to the present, my daughter has grown a lot based from all she has been through & experiences. This essay proves & shows a lot about why this place means to her.
ReplyDelete2. I liked how it seemed very organized & words were clear and very understandable. I liked how my daughter talked about organization the most. I would like to see her improve on when she's doing something, the best is being organized in order to get her work done easier & faster. 3. I thought that the best has to be the voice because in a way, you can voice out what she really wants to say or what she can feel about it.
4. I think that she should improve ore on the word choice.
-Macrina/Jhune Ponce
(Mother/father of Melissa Ponce)