I understand how many tourists come here every year and I say, "Great!" But whatever you do here and everywhere you go is done at your own risk, as I'm pretty sure is the same for sights in the mainland. It's very important for the tourists to be aware of their surroundings in order to keep themselves away from danger. The airport gives away free brochures and in them, states what you should be careful of when visiting a certain place. There are also different methods as to gain more information about a site itself; they should have done some research on the internet before going out to explore the wonders and attractions we have here. As for David Potts, he shouldn't have been near a blowhole to begin with, let alone dancing around it.
In other cases, drowning, falling greatly off a steep cliff, etc. come as other issues our state has to deal with due to the tourists not watching where they're going or stepping. Situations like these, unfortunately happen many times, and there are newspapers that state it all. As stated in the article, "Some guidebooks and Internet hiking sites list the split trail as an unofficial hike". So the families of Paula Ramirez and Elizabeth Brem can't say that they hadn't been warned. Many agree that a lot of these 'misfortunes' happen aimlessly and out of our proportion, but that's what online websites or brochures or our tour guide is for.
The government can't blame themselves for all these happenings. They've done a great job trying to warn the public about the possible dangers. They've put up signs and warnings and if the tourists haven't seen them, then it's all on them. Even some of the parks have security and people are free to ask as many questions as they want. It's understandable that people came here to have fun, but safety measures actually lead to fun. It's all common sense and the tourists need to be aware that things like these happen; not everyday, but keeping an eye out and stepping back from possible corruptions will definitely give them a memorable vacation.
Hi Melissa,
ReplyDeleteYour blog post expresses an opinion and presents reasons to support it. You have the basic idea of a position statement and how to develop it.
Next, you need to work on clarity in your writing. Sometimes, the ideas could be expressed more simply and there are some words, such as "aimlessly" and "corruption" that don't fit in their contexts.
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